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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Oh. Pig. Wide-eyed. Dan is no Odysseus then.

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Katharine Kapodistria's avatar

It doesn't seem so… Thanks for the restack!

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

Uh-oh. I think Damoleon is right. Dan reeks of trouble brewing. Excellent!

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Katharine Kapodistria's avatar

Thank you, Liz!

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Josh Louis's avatar

I love the way you use dialogue in this piece. It helps you build the world, establish character dynamics, and set the tone for the story. Looking forward to reading part 2!

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Katharine Kapodistria's avatar

Thanks, Josh! I had a lot of fun writing the interactions in this one!

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