Absolutely wonderful! This first chapter reads like your well versed best friend telling you a story. Using colorful descriptors that make you feel like you were there while the literature magically opts out of taking you on a tour of the color wheel. Each event stands out with diversity yet serves a courtesy to the eyes and tongue as the flow of reading is as enjoyable as an energized conversation. ❤️❤️❤️ can’t wait for more.
To the author: I found spelling errors and there were two sentences that I found to be redundant. Even with what I found consider me a new fan. In short, I loved it.
Thank you so much for the thoughtful comment! It's so encouraging! I'd love to know the sentences you felt were redundant (and the spelling errors, but I'm not paying you to proofread 😉). I'm here to learn!
Great hook at the end, Im ready for more.
I'm glad you enjoyed it - there are 9 chapters up on Substack so far, so by all means, dive in!
Such a rich beginning!
Thank you so much for the encouragement, Leanne ❤️ I'm so excited to share the rest!
Absolutely wonderful! This first chapter reads like your well versed best friend telling you a story. Using colorful descriptors that make you feel like you were there while the literature magically opts out of taking you on a tour of the color wheel. Each event stands out with diversity yet serves a courtesy to the eyes and tongue as the flow of reading is as enjoyable as an energized conversation. ❤️❤️❤️ can’t wait for more.
To the author: I found spelling errors and there were two sentences that I found to be redundant. Even with what I found consider me a new fan. In short, I loved it.
Thank you so much for the thoughtful comment! It's so encouraging! I'd love to know the sentences you felt were redundant (and the spelling errors, but I'm not paying you to proofread 😉). I'm here to learn!
καλοτάξιδο το βιβλίο σου φίλη μου!!! May your book soar to great heights!
Ευχαριστώ φίλη μου! ❤️